Sunday, October 12, 2008

Destiny, Dragging On Comments

Rating: 5.0

My destiny is tired.
The slope leads upwards, onwards,

Into clouds and far beyond.
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Rani Turton
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Dr Hitesh Sheth 18 January 2009

My destiny walks tirelessly on path shown by dharma, forever, in very this life i must exhaust my karmas............. Good write...........

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Bob Blackwell 25 October 2008

Life's journey at times can be hard, but always worth following. Beautiful write, I also loved it. Bob

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Ron Flowers 17 October 2008

I loved this poem. I love the flow of it and the reality of it. A 10 from me. Regards Ron

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Kesav Easwaran 12 October 2008

the poem ends telling the truth of the hard reality of life...mumbling or no mumbling there is no other way but to keep moving ahead up -slope in life...a brilliant write...thoughtful and thought provoking...10

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