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One alone made by Him
To pursue his own dreams
And come up tops like cream.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Aniruddha Pathak 10 May 2019

Date & Time: 5/9/2019 9: 18: 00 PM Remove this comment Poem: 55269462 - Destiny Despairs Member: Yoonoos Peerbocus Comment: the end rhyme craft uplifts the gist of the theme..nice as always - - - Thanks, I was apprehensive, too many rhymes sometimes hinder rather than help.

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