Tuesday, August 14, 2012

Destiny Comments

Rating: 4.8

Either Fate or choice
We seem to find each other.
Distance apart our souls connect.
A magnetic pull or in the hands of God
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Michael Peterson
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Practicing Poetess 03 September 2017

Michael, if you edit this poem, it will be A + material! Not grammatically perfect. Did you mean fate in Line 1, or did you truly mean faith? Line 4 should read or the hands of God. Line 5 should read an internal love. Content-wise, a lovely tribute to a wife!

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Michael Peterson 04 September 2017

Thank you for your help

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Janesville, Wisconsin
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