Michael, if you edit this poem, it will be A + material!
Not grammatically perfect.
Did you mean fate in Line 1, or did you truly mean faith?
Line 4 should read or the hands of God.
Line 5 should read an internal love.
Content-wise, a lovely tribute to a wife!
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Michael, if you edit this poem, it will be A + material! Not grammatically perfect. Did you mean fate in Line 1, or did you truly mean faith? Line 4 should read or the hands of God. Line 5 should read an internal love. Content-wise, a lovely tribute to a wife!
Thank you for your help