Destiny Comments

I believe in destiny. I liked the journey to the proper place. A amazing poem.

You very evocatively draw the reader into the situation of your poem with ease and skill and then the kiss of destiny knows its power only too well. Thanks, arya

This is really written well. I thought I was reading a romance novel. Tha is essentially what this is. The difference, I suppose, is that it is a good romance novel. GW62

I wanted to let you know that this was a good poem well written. The only thing that requires attention is the spelling of one word. In the forth from the last line you use the word raping. This word needs another p and a w in front of it. Wrapping means to enclose as with your hand around it. I am sure that is what you mean. Raping means the act of rape; which I am sure is not what you meant. I sent you this message separately so that you can delet it. This poem is too good to have such a typo. Adeline

Angel How well you detail a moment in time. That breathless moment before the first kiss. Good job. Adeline

simply breathe taking! ! love it!