Monday, August 15, 2016

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Every thing that we told together was wrong
Tell me goodbye tell me good bye
You know
I know
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tabasom azadee
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Chinedu Dike 17 February 2018

Brave utterances set aside for sober reflection. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 31 May 2017

Our love is a foolish story That we created to forget fact Go go go Don't come back You are good and i am bad.. sooo did u say always. ok.. go away from me.......... love, its complications, the wounds that it creates..... all expressed so well in this poem dear poetess. thank you. tony

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Kelly Kurt 17 August 2016

Well conceived and nicely written, Tabasom. Thanks

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Rajnish Manga 15 August 2016

Love cannot survive on its own. It needs to be nurtured by mutual respect and understanding when we talk about our relationships. Once broken, it is too difficult to re-construct. This is very painful. Thanks for sharing the poem that says so much about human nature, love and life. Don't explain any thing / You are good / And I m bad Goodbye goodbye / Don't ask me why My heart is so small / You cant be in that more

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