Friday, July 11, 2014

Destiny Comments

Rating: 5.0

'There is always one person
For someone in this world
One lovely person that could
Take your breath away...
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Jesus Diaz Llorico
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Howard Savage 30 December 2015

Beautiful illustration of words. True statement, there is someone in this world that will take your breath away. seize the moment, as you stated, it might never come again. #10

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Colleen Courtney 11 July 2014

Like this poem and the truth it contains. Life is a game of taking chances. Sometimes we win and sometimes not. But everything is fleeting. Nothing lasts forever. Nicely written poem!

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