Monday, June 17, 2013

Destiny Comments

Rating: 5.0

When a cold wind blows on a lonely heart
Your soul can feel the chill
As a raging storm tears your world apart
And your heart will not be still.
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keith brown
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Soran M. H 18 May 2020

Well done you have started with great poetic images and ended with wisdom and the logic of life, this poem should be written with gold water, love in its broadest sense is the key to happiness 10/10 thanks for sharing..

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Soran M. H 18 May 2020

When a cold wind blows on a lonely heart Your soul can feel the chill As a raging storm tears your world apart And your heart will not be still.

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