Saturday, December 31, 2011

Destiny Comments

Rating: 4.8

The mountain is steep,
My pace, I just cannot keep.
A tumbling stone or a hurricane,
Can put me in huge pain.
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Chinedu Dike 15 July 2015

Destiny - a force believed to control events makes life different for everyone. A well articulated narrative piece of poetry insightfully penned with conviction. I like the rhyme scheme of the poem. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Areeba Sohail 01 January 2012

obviously 10++++++++

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Vipins Puthooran 31 December 2011

This's an amzing penning! ! Beautiful poem! ! ! 10++

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Dave Walker 31 December 2011

Wow a great write. Good poem.

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