Destiny Comments

He saw her spinning the threads of destinies Each thread represents individual’s fate Choose then your destiny, she said wonderful philosophical poem about destiny belonging to surrealism, thank you for sharing 10/10

A pleasureable read indeed, Noel...Tell-Tale is obviously a maximized literary strength for you....I like the tone you set from the get-go...the stanzaic structure moves mellifluously, and your attention to detail is quite darting. Stellar all-around Crafting. F j R

wow! ! ! Noel what a fabulous tale ever told here.............excellent! ! !

w8..i dont know how to give a commnt for this..this is a mythology written in a modern version..so nice to read...nicely done..

a beautiful tale...a very nice one......10

A beautiful way of writing, with an interesting story..truly loved it..........

It is very nice and he never know his destiny.......... whole of good thought and gifted to read..................

A lovely story of a lad searching for the future yet unknown, great work! where did you get the word babalawo from? In Nigeria, yoruba to be precises it means the native doctor, the foreseer, one who commute with the gods.great plot and ideas.Kudos