(! ! ! !) Destiny Comments

in the subterranean depth, the buzzing sound grows dimmer. Death! wielding over life......................wonderful write yet ingenious by imagery and metaphors,10+++, thanks for sharing

nice symbolistic poem, deep ideas well embedded, lovely to read

very nice, and where was its nectar, it must have gone sweeter after the additional sugar :) anyway, the fate we traced...must be destiny.