Monday, June 29, 2009

Destiny Comments

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We met at the pool when you were just a kid
such a gentle soul, a life barely lived
i had to leave for a little while
you welcomed me back with that same warm smile
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John Johnston
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Debora Duwa Mtambalika 18 July 2018

The whole poem is like telling my story. I Love it, I once had the experience, great job!

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T Brwn 29 July 2009

A story about a growing relationship, i love it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! from the first day to the present and all in between. fantastic! 10+++

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I truely like the way you write hey...so simple but yet so good.

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Natasha Wellington 14 July 2009

This Poem; Has To Be My Favourite So Far; Breath Taking it Really Puts me In your perpective but also My Own; Love It (=

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Jasmin Bell 29 June 2009

awsome! i can't write npoems that long.take a look at poems.i could use your opinion

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