We met at the pool when you were just a kid
such a gentle soul, a life barely lived
i had to leave for a little while
you welcomed me back with that same warm smile
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A story about a growing relationship, i love it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! from the first day to the present and all in between. fantastic! 10+++
I truely like the way you write hey...so simple but yet so good.
This Poem; Has To Be My Favourite So Far; Breath Taking it Really Puts me In your perpective but also My Own; Love It (=
awsome! i can't write npoems that long.take a look at poems.i could use your opinion
The whole poem is like telling my story. I Love it, I once had the experience, great job!