Thursday, April 16, 2009

Destiny Comments

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There is a light for every person you see
There's a light for you and there's a light for me
The light will guide us to our path.
But we have the strongest power.
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Rachael Miroddi 16 April 2009

Very pretty poem. a little corrections on rhythm could be made here and there. but other then that the message is very well spoken.

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