Saturday, February 11, 2006

Destined For Endings Comments

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how did we get here love,
here at the place
where the sky glances back at the earth
here at the end of our world.
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Eila Mahima Jaipaul
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William Jackson 11 February 2006

I like your poem. It is sad to have moved forward with great progress to the edge of the horizon itself and yet have no where else to go, feeling that others are sucking the life out of you, and watching a relationship end with someone with whom you formally had a great connection and who has now chosen to go his or her own separate way.

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