Destinations Comments

Beautiful poem. It goes straight to the heart. Everyone can relate to it. And you have put your feelings so well, in such lovely imagery.10

Where are they taking me I will take the helm of life's ship, Steer it towards the sun of smiles A beautiful and thoughtful poem.....beautifully narrated.....thank you for sharing :)

Verily, the question, Where are they taking me? is very thoughtful.

This poem you have written as a true philosopher. You begin the poem with a beautiful reflection on life. Alone in this world Lost in a sea of time The destinations mocking me, Where are they taking me? This is a question, i ask too, everyday of my life! A fabulous picture, Ayman! Yes, it is full 10

Lost in the sea of time! But, there is hope ahead of me. Nice work.

Taking destinations in life's ship is very wise, interesting and amazing definitely. Fantastic sharing done with reality.10

I will take the hem of life's ship steer it towards the sun of smiles- - -We have to fight loneliness, frustrations and glooms and stay focussed to reach our destination.- - -Thanks for sharing the beautiful poem