Saturday, June 19, 2010

Destination Undecided Comments

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Heading down the winding path,
That leads through the trees
The sun is sinking toward the earth,
Towards it i shall go.
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Samantha Samis
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Life is a tryer. So keep up moving along with it.

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Kial Whitmire 20 June 2010

Well written, one thing I've done different in my live is to fall but not let myself fall hard because you need some falls to know what it is your walking on. Your poems are contagious, I find myself reading one and thrown into another.

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Path to no where, lonely, but what a journey. My only goal is to keep from falling.... to have conitnual faith to see you through. A lovely poem and quite deep I might add.; D

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