Destination Comments

Ali, such a wonderful verse. Sometimes the magnitude of a task prevents one from taking even a first step on a journey. A great work, Ali.

I believe we were born with an empty place inside us that is always seeking its proper resident, its Creator. This poem reveals the desire, the loneliness, the plaintive plea. 10

Verily, very short, sweet and thoughtful

Dear Poet, Very shortbut like a shrp bullet. Thanks! Please reply.

Simple but very deep inside.The urge for finding out dear one is expressed with brevity of expression.A cute poem.

If you earnestly desire, no need of wondering how to approach Him! He will come to you! Enjoyed! !

A nice poem of longing for connection. I'm always looking for new perspectives when I find feelings like this bothering me. One perspective that helps me emotionally sometimes, is the answer of my poem An Apology to a similar feeling. The poem's answer is the realization that looking for God is the wrong question. The right answer is the revelation that God is everywhere already. We are like fish in the water who lack the clarity of vision to understand the the water is their constant support and source of life. There is no center to get to, no destination to reach, God is simply everywhere, the center is infinite! God is the water of our existence. In my humble opinion of course.

desire for almighty i see and needy heart To His love.....nice piece

thought provoking and nice.. haiku... love it..

He is there is true. But no one knows where He is. How can one reach without knowing? Nice little poem. Thank you.

We human beings are subject to moods and some inner phases, and this your thought captures such dark moment, by a li'l effort one can have a self-teaching for not thinking like this...the ways to approach are not wanting at all...! ! !