Monday, June 16, 2008

Despite Life I Died Comments

Rating: 4.5

I begged her to stay
Not taking into account
That having her leave would make her happier
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Rakeem Person
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Great expression, I can feel every word. Sad, but the ending, you died... for a while, showed that you can still live, even through all the pain. excellent job...

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