Saturday, May 21, 2022

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Rating: 5.0

(Inspired by "If There Is A Right War" Poem by Yonah Jeong)
It is wrongly said
and wrongly quoted,
repeatedly
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
war
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Innocent young men and women are deployed at the war front in the name of patriotism. Indian philosophy exhorts one to follow the maxim "Vasudhaiva Kudumbakam" meaning "the entire world is our family".

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Alyx Thru Edge 10 July 2024

Thank you, I can only agree: no legitimation to ending a single life, war is and remains murder and colourful ideological decoration does not change it. Great to realign all hopes towards peace not justification of cruelty.

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War cannot be justified in the wildest of imaginations

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I had posted "Thank You" notes to the posts of Bharati, Dilipji, Belle Wassermeister, Chinedu Dike, Richard Wlodarski and Dr Azim Nehal here. But all of them have disappeared. Could you please help me reinstate them..

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Chinedu Dike 24 May 2022

Well articuated and nicely brought forth with deep insight. Facts do not cease to exist because they're being ignored...

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I feel gratified, dear poet, that you have been able to capture the essence of the poem. Thank You.

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M. Asim Nehal 23 May 2022

Very well said, We all should condemn war but how about war of words instead?

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Yes! Dr Nehal. It is my opinion about the futility of war that I have expressed. If anyone has a different take, I am ready for a ‘war of words' it that suits him/her😊

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Bharati Nayak 22 May 2022

'Nothing but Nothing is fair in war.'---I agree with you.But when there is an aggressor who comes stomping to occupy your territory, this war for self defense is very much justified.A wonderful poem that expresses concern over futility of war.

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You are true, about the aggressor, Bharati. One need to defend the people, the common man, against aggression. And I am fully aware that there are occasions when war becomes imperative to protect/defend their will.

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Thank You, Bharati for the detailed notes on the poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 May 2022

The poet is absolutely right in expressing the undeniable truth! What the poet has expressed at the end goes beyond any shadow of doubt so far as humanity is concerned. A highly expressive poem. Top score!

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It gives me always immense pleasure to read your in-depth and considered observations on my poems. Thank you Dilipji. Much obliged.

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Belle Wassermeister 22 May 2022

Very well expressed, Unnikrishnan. Five stars.

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Thank You, Ms Wassermeister, for your time and for the observations on the poem. Obliged, dear poet.

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Richard Wlodarski 22 May 2022

Great wisdom from a compassionate heart. Outstanding poem, Poet Menon.

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I am much obliged to you, Richard for the good words on my poem as well as on my person. Fell great, when it comes from you.

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Prem Nizar Hameed 22 May 2022

A wise composition by a beautiful mind.

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Thank You, Dear Poet for reading the poem and marking your observations. Much obliged.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 21 May 2022

Words of wisdom, well communicated in this powerful verse, describing the evils and fruitlessness of war.

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Thank You Evelyn for sharing your appreciation of the poem.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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