Desperation - Tanka Comments

Desperation is such a kind of emotion to thrust us into nothing...nice metaphor there.. thoughtful write...liked

Beautifully and heartfully described! .. Ever such a heart touching reflection! .. Beyond #'S! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++

It really adds to my pain and anchors in my heart

A melancholy poem, which very aptly portrays desperation, through vivid imagery. Wonderfully crafted.

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Beautiful poem captured in few words

Wonderful Tanka Bravo rose-Marie! ! ! !

Thanks for sharing this poem...

....swept away by sea swells...... excellent piec

A heart touching ink. Loved it. Thanks friend.