Desperation For Love Comments

This poem flows beautifully and leads the reader into the inner feelings of desperation for love. The repetition of words adds to the sense of despiration which leaves the reader with a feeling of hope that you will find that beautiful love. Excellent.

A wonderful poem... loved it. Many congratulations dear poet.

Life without love is lungs without breathing! - nice to read the poem; congrats for being selected the poem as POD

Congratulations to the poet on selection as POD for the day. Beautiful poem. Top score

This is soooo good! Lovin' it =)

I loved the way you used the last word repeated on each line...this is very hard to do...willl a good idea that I should follow for my poem...but I have to get a powerful inspiration...Thank you for sharing your poem with us

yes, yes, yes. you kept the second verse and finished on a killer note. this is my personal favourite. you are a star.

umm, I can only say: This poem is Soooooo good. This poem's better than all the poems I study in school. If you publish a book on poetry, I will buy it. I never bought a book on poetry.

I like the linking repetitions here. Very original

i just love the flow of this one and i know it speaks to the many who have felt this way...but it's the way you've woven the words to express how you feel that i'm very impressed with...

you can really feel the desperation in this poem..with the double but's and yet's..it adds to the mood. repetittion is one of the poetess's best ways to make an impression..