Desperation Comments
A gaze in the night sky
Got me looking at the snail's pace fading clouds.
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Some really vivid imagery here Fantone....I thoroughly enjoyed reading it!
A very nicely written first offering... imagery pops vividly out of the verse.10+
This is a vital expression, a livewire of thought and feeling... wonderful work
Well conceived and nicely penned in persuasive poetic expressions from the heart. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing, Fantone.
A good start with a nice poem, Fantone Mdala. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
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7/26/2025 6:20:39 PM # 1.0.0
The internal turmoil and deep emotions of the lover has found beautiful expression in this poem.Let me quote- - Now all that is left is the embrace Of that precious memory to torture me To the point of desperation........
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