Desperation Comments

U wear a mask of goodness with spite within

hi, its a good poem. u have briefly described ur life but very clearly & very skilfully. great work thanks for sharing.

Dont make sunrise turn sunset Mohamed Umar, dont need to start hate yourself...this poem really deep and i know it deeper than i could reached..Embrace your days as life is unwritten, you are driver of your own destiny..u must know this :) If u hate yourself who else will understand and like u more, coz even you self hate u...Love yourself because you were meant to born and U are born special just believe and no need to degrade what u have now...Believe me to believe u, i believe in U friend :) _Unwritten Soul