Monday, January 23, 2006

Desperation Comments

Rating: 4.0

What will I write about in this sonnet?
Of who's existence I really don't care...
Why, just the thought of doing it
Makes me feel the need for fresh air!
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Guppie Stokes
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Neisha Williams 23 January 2006

Teachers are not wired, we're chemically imbalanced-especially those of us who teach high school. I grudgingly like this poem, being part of the 'wired' teachers as you so mention them. It is really cute, but there is a reason for you guys to write these sonnets, Goober. Seriously though, I do like this poem. It's very creative, and for lack of a better adjective, 'Barni-like.' (By the way, that's a compliment.)

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