Thursday, September 25, 2008

Desperate Times Comments

Rating: 4.5

I hope when your ego is scraping the ceiling
and your mirrors grow tired of that smile,
you will choke on the guilt trip denying you feeling
and drown in seductive style.
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Neil Graham Marsden
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Nadine Miller 22 August 2015

Your writing has always been captivating and evokes so many emotions! Good expression of intense emotions. The imagery is very vivid! Thanks for sharing this with me.... Nadine

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Stacey Watts 09 October 2008

Wow this a very heart wrenching poem. It kept me riveted to the end. Great job!

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Reshma Ramesh 01 October 2008

good one again............

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