Friday, June 26, 2020

Desperate Dreams Comments

Rating: 3.5

Through a glass object
Drunk on life, yet
Stuttering on delusions.
How the still dusk betrays
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Peter Vealey
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Jon Ian Clarke. 24 July 2020

Another excellent poem Peter! I really enjoyed the way this poem portrays feelings of hope & aspirations; what is it that lays ahead of us, as human beings, potentially! I really enjoyed this piece of work Peter, well done!

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