Satish, this is excellent. The narrative is beautifully and imaginately put together. The major drawback is the inclusion of 'bipolars and schizophreniacs' in the pernulitamte stanza. It falls flat as a result of it sounding hectoring. The poem reads great without them.
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Satish, this is excellent. The narrative is beautifully and imaginately put together. The major drawback is the inclusion of 'bipolars and schizophreniacs' in the pernulitamte stanza. It falls flat as a result of it sounding hectoring. The poem reads great without them.