Friday, January 25, 2008

Despair Comments

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Despair, pain, sadness, heartache
I’m dying inside
Can anyone hear me?
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Aiesha Freela
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Rhiannon Scase 22 March 2008

WOW! you used metaphors so vividly to express your feelings! Great poem, i look forward to more! Rhiannon*

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Ruth Campbell 13 February 2008

Aiesha, I know just how you feel, but it's a big world out there. Give yourself time and space to explore yourself. You can't expect to meet your 'one and only' yet! Love, Ruth

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Aiesha Freela

Aiesha Freela

San Diego, California
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