Saturday, February 22, 2025

Desolation Of Dreams~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

Four saplings planted, hopes so high,
a father's burden, 'neath a weary sky.
he dreamt of shoulders, strong and true,
to bear his weight, when life was through.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Aarzoo Mehek 04 July 2025

Harsh realities of life. Siblings and their demands are never ending. So well written

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Rebecca Navarre 20 April 2025

A lesson Hopeful the younger generation will learn from, with compassionate hearts! ....

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Rebecca Navarre 20 April 2025

Very creatively and so heart touchingly expressed! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 20 April 2025

Ohh, The sorrows of family and siblings so deeply heart felt! .. And unfortunately common.

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Mana Kavingyan 22 February 2025

Dear sir warm greetings, kindly take some necessary action if possible over the irritating advertisements floating over the poem hunter, Being reported also there is no progress from poem hunter site, Thanks

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 22 February 2025

Asim this has brilliance Thanx for sharing bravo! ! ! ! !

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Anjandev Roy 22 February 2025

This is a wonderful piece throughout.... thank u.... friend....

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