Monday, January 30, 2012

Desolation And Despair Comments

Rating: 5.0

A plain of barren rock,
beneath a leaden sky.
No breeze, no rain, just still, dead air,
a desolate place to die.
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Jojoba Mansell
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Luke A. J Wilton 30 January 2012

I really liked this poem so much I couldn't explain it. The texture of your words was immaculate. Well done.

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