Friday, December 11, 2020

Desolated Sigh Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beside the wall's ears
Eavesdropping heart feels alone
Tears in misty moss
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Sankhajit Bhattacharjee 11 December 2020

deep thinking with marvelous expression...broader sense in fewer words...10+

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 December 2020

An excellent short work! Appreciated and admired the essence of this wonderful little poem..5 stars.

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Kostas Lagos 11 December 2020

A well written senryu Mahtab. Wonderful

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Varsha M 11 December 2020

Eavesdropping might bring wrong message Direct communication always escape Misconceptions that never took birth there....

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