Desiring Half-Forms Comments

Wow the setting and scenery of imagery is impressive here and matches your muse and lonesome poetic mood fabulously. Kudos for this great poem! ! Pls pleez do comment/ review my newest poem too titled, " The Hajj pilgrimage "

A delightful piece of poetry, so well complemented by the graphic. I love the layout, three stanzas so well integrated. A perfect symmetry. A poem that is rich in form as well as content. A night lit by a half-moon and a heart bereft of love, craving wholeness. Everything stirs the heart despite the stillness of the atmosphere. That's a marvel to achieve....a sense of inner restlessness depicted in the most serene way.

A delightful piece of poetry, so well complemented by the graphic. I love the layout, three stanzas so well integrated. A perfect symmetry. A poem that is rich in form as well as content. A night lit by a half-moon and a heart bereft of love, craving wholeness. Everthing stirs the heart despite the stillness of the atmosphere. Thats a marvel to achieve....a sense of inner restlessness depicted in the most serene way.