He was very much fond of crushing sugar cane,
With the teeth so strong, and sucking its juice,
Then came a day when all his teeth were lost due to age,
Now he couldn't crush and took the juice packed in tins,
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Interesting dream sequence. Shows aging as a reality out there to stall fulfillment of even the most innocent of desires in life. Thanks a lot.
Enjoyed this poem...........................................................
Awww I was expecting a happy ending with him eating sugar cane again, but you make it even more interesting and the reader raises his or her eyebrows in shock. Excellent write.....
An interesting and thoughtful write..........................10
A fabulous poem. Sir, I have not seen your new posts since ages. Please come back!