Desires Comments

It just cant be true...

Quite an element of nature everywhere.. You have a mature way of looking at things.. Havent found much flaws in your work but theres a definite flaw in your biography. Your age is false.

At Last, at Last I find a Flaw, I hunt High and Low addicted by the Poetry you write, I consumed just seven at one sitting! And now I find good reason to dock a point. A Flaw, yes just one I am proud to find. Your spelling of Master Shelley with one 'E' I forgive but not a Thousand Poets might. But for all that count upon my Praise Philip

the poem was intelligently written but you need more flow...... to make this a better read... 10s