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A good childhood makes a wonderful adulthood :) It also makes this poem! Nice work!

a very optimistic poem

Wao what a thematic poem...returning back to childhood seems to be a childish desire, if anyone has right to do so then majority of us want to do so, but i don't want to go back, i don't want to face all that troubled years...hope your innocent desire comes true in dream: -) haha

A good poem Hari, I would love to go back in my past to correct a few mistakes.

A strong desire to retrace our steps and go back to the point from which we started! ! A desire so rampant in everyone, especially for those in the evening of their lives! ! Often I am plagued by this desire! !

nice poem, the theme developed well.. wish you good luck..

Good poem...i miss that phase too but certainly i dont want to go back as i cant work hard to pass all those horrible school exams... salute to childhood...from the distance! ! !

Sweeeeet. Childhood was so much more simple.

lovely poem about the drooping life or say dusky and desire to be a child, an innocent creature/child mirth is the worth