Desire V Maybe Comments

The first stanza really resonated with me. Beautifully written and simply stated. Thank you for sharing.

it is very well written, loved it!

Great little poem - thanks for your skill - much appreciated

Wow! such a nice sparkling poem made of wisdom, I love it so much, and thank you for sharing us your knowledge.

Food for thought. in this piece of writing.

Well written. enjoyable, Try reading mine and comment.

This poem covers concisely the ifs and maybes or never will be's of desire and loves often uncertain path. Very wise.

Once i read a statement which i would like to share here, , when you are confused between 2 options, , just flip the coin in the air, , it'll not solve your problem, , , but, , , while coin will be coming back in the air, you'll come to know what your heart is really hoping for.....

Climax versus anticlimax well represented..Good job and thanks for sharing

meaningful words of wisdom! SG xo