Desire's Web- A Fallacious Dream. Comments

A very rare kind of dream suggestive in many ways! I am sure you have written this poem after much contemplation on life. Now with age, you know what it is to lead a serene life and how it would be if one falls into the luscious charms of Desire! Desire never stays alone.... she has a large retinue to accompany her namely Jealousy, Greed, Envy and Avarice! One is likely to be easily bewitched by the charms of Desire and we can easily predict his future! You have beautifully put a great truth in the form of a poem. At every turn of the story, I was anxious to know what would happen at the end!