Desire Of Love ❤ Comments

Lovely narrative poem based on a deeply romantic relationship. Fantastic portrayal of emotions and mutual yearning. Thanks.

it was a long dream I too often scream and the sea says silent u b someone will hear ye what will they think in dreams what we are doing but then when dreams brak only tears come by why did i not before his going cry now when will he come by the shore sea silently receds as does my dream I beseach the beach

Hi Kavita, This poem is more beautiful in this new shape. Lovely.

You know to express yourself; I am impressed.