Wednesday, March 19, 2008

Desire It Makes My Heart So Weep Comments

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My frustrated heart it sometimes weeps
For the words I wish I could speak
To tell you how I am truly feeling
How desire for you it sends me reeling
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Rani Turton 02 May 2008

Very touchingly put. Sometimes words are not needed, you can show in other ways that you love him. In any case eyes are the mirror of the soul and they must be telling him all that you feel. Good luck, Sue and thanks for the poem.

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James B. Earley 21 April 2008

There is a poem here at PoemHunter 'Circumstantially Unable To Be Lovers, ' please read! Excellent work, thanks.

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Mick Law 05 April 2008

for goodness tell him, you can still be friends if he doesnt love you (how can he not!) and if the worst happens then melancoly is a wonderfull inspirer of poetry. It is better to know................ Mick x x x

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