Tuesday, June 28, 2011

'Desire For You' Comments

Rating: 5.0

My stars of sky, my bree's of beach
I feel you are united and bonded with me
like a bird thirsty of water for months
suddenly finding a oasis
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 28 June 2011

Great poem. Wonderfully conceived. I liked it for its remarkable imagery and decent style. Rated it 10. TFS..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.

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