Sunday, July 28, 2019

Desire Dissolving Downward Comments

Rating: 5.0

your smile dissolved in the rain
split into atoms of delight, to rearrange in my brain.
your eyes said goodbye while your mouth, a moue of red,
said hello blowing a salty kiss on the air.
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Andy Brookes
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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 July 2019

you said goodbye with an endearing starry smile, which really meant a farewell, a soft sad ending.....so touching. Brilliant poem on love with haunting expression Thank you a lot..

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Jane Campion 28 July 2019

To say goodbye so sweetly is a delight. Well penned, dear Andy.

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