Friday, February 24, 2012

Desire And Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm in a never
Ending dream
In an endless stream
There must be another way out
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Gambei Merc
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Gambei Merc 09 March 2012

I am honored thank you n i will check out your poems

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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 24 February 2012

The end makes the poem appear romantic...like the poet is in a dream world with his love, and do not wish to be disturbed...maybe or maybe....nice write up...kudos. Please you should read my poem....My emotions betray me and Written at midnight hour...thanks for sharing

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