! Desire Comments

a surkar in rhymes and rhythms

I Desire You Desire Who desires He achieves Who Desires He regrets Yet, to desire to desire forever....... the secret of existence........

tiny desire of mine to dance with the rainbows........beautiful! !

The desires here, in fact, are infinitely tall! The desire ‘To dance in the rains with no attire’ seems to be attainable! What makes poetry different from prose is the imaginative element that it might contain...richly imaginative piece this one...good attempt on rhyming too...10

A well structured poem, Vidyadhar, carr y on

I like this peom very much indeed because it read like as one of the best Chinese ancient poems, with rhymes on some of the sentences ending very nice, so I give you marks full of 10.

and freedom is the only choice, let all happen true by desire even not wedded to reason, fire never burns the fear, anyhow wonderfully interesting by the reading yet with imagery, what happens to happen that does not happen but what never happens to happen that happens true, yet amystery on the rune of desire by sheer principle of uncertainty, , , , , , wellpenned,10+, thanks for sharing

Such desires may sound odd. But they are so natural, every human wants them to be fulfilled........very beautifully penned. Reminds me the song 'chota sa aasha....'

A fine gesticulation of wanting to be free, to have a liberty over some needs...a 10.

Vidyadhar, Very beautiful and melodious poems... It is fine desires/// 10/// Tsira