Desire Comments

I forgot to mention: they should be flipped around. If you were ever to inherit a fortune, believe me, within a month you’ll regret it.

This is a great poem. It is too bad that it is spoiled by a negative thought on marriage. A month’s happiness for marriage? Must be something wrong with the desire. Is the poem just a jab at marriage, or has the author really become disillusioned? Unfortunately that is the foremost thought the poem leaves in the mind of the reader. That is sad for such a good poem. Adeline

What a great desire you have! I indeed enjoy this write of yours.Thanks for sharing.

nice poem, but wedding is not a month happiness, its living and loving the mate for a lifetime, and helping some one for lifetime happiness is also good point.... nice try

this poem is amazing, love it........i desire a lifetime of happiness with the 1 i love

That what give a person meaning to survive in this earth i.e.desire.Another good write by you.