Desire Comments
We cannot aspire to that, which is already dead,
And there is no solace in delusion;
We should save the present for future memories;
Thus, to remember we had a life we lived.
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This is an outstanding poem dear poetess Pirjol. I find eneromous pleasure to read this wonderful piece of work time and again.
Good poem. Very happy to revisit this poem after a long time. Great feeling!
I want to say so much about this poem but there's not enough space to respond. I consider DESIRE the essence of our humanity, and your poem tellds the truth about desire. It's not wish-fulfillment. It's something
A spark in life is what all i can say about desires. Your poem is a gem.
Only those desires that haven't been realised live on. - Nice 5+ and one of my favs
Wonderful poem. I have longed myself and tried a few times to write a poem or essay on desire. But I have ended up each time deleting the lines or tearing up the paper. Desire is such a big thing and the older I become, the clearer it becomes to me that the desire to be kind and good, is perhaps the one bringing us closest to true happiness
powerful poem on life, I really appreciate it.. I love to write as well, have my own poetry so please check my site 2 :)
The chastity of senses shall purge our spirits pure, And rise above this Life whose claim is to endure......fantastic
A unique poem! So elegantly constructed... my great pleasure reading this magnificent piece of work time and again to my utmost satisfaction! Long live your poetry! !
I am extremely delighted to find this beautiful poem among top 500 member poems today (#474) . Many congratulations! !
The chastity of senses shall purge our spirits pure...is the kernel of this magnificent piece of poetry! I get enormous pleasure to reading this wonderful poem time and again to my utmost satisfaction! A great poem!
How a superbus phallus in carnal pleasure dies/That ephemeral all these earthly passions are/Like the face of moon from dusk till dawn/When sun replace its ardour with other kind of warmth....sparkling expression! My great pleasure to read such a magnificent work of yours time and again! To MyPoemList
To anyone, on this mortal realm of mortals; Nothing we are, but an evanescent breath of air; it's beautiful expressive; beautiful 10+++++++++++++++
I am delighted to find this wonderful poem being featured in top 500 member poems (#328 today) ! A well deserved one....many congratulations!
A great and powerful poem on life. Each and every stanza is so well composed and conveyed imparting capsules of wisdom. Liked the last stanza, it expresses all. SUPERBLY penned!
Love this stanza.... amazing how simple words when cleverly used, combine to form great verse. We cannot aspire to that which is already dead, And there is no solace in delusion; We should save the present for future memories; Thus, to remember we had a life we lived.
Philosophic word. I feel poem like afternoon talk with coffee when someone want tell that he love forever... Nice...
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A great poem. A gem to be treasured forever... timeless