Sunday, February 3, 2008

Desire Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have a burning desire…
I desire to love you until the day I die
A desire to make you fall for me
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Jade DragonHeart
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Dr Antony Theodore 07 May 2010

liked these lines of ur poem. Let our love shine through the clouds Let our hearts weld together And allow our desires, to take us over nice poem.. thank u for sharing

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Beautiful from start to finish...wonderful choice of imagery and verse, , , very well written 10

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Caleigh Seawright 08 May 2008

there is only one word to describe this... ♥ Beautiful.♥

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