Desire Comments

Shared ur desire. Appreciable emotion for mankind.

.....fine composition.............10

I'm not sure about the title of this piece. It seems to me that confined or restricted may have been a more appropriate title for this. It really wasn't a very unique message. I don't think you can put a word like desire in a title and expect the reader to be impressed after they read such a writing as this. It was, in my view, average. GW62

A wonderful poem rooted in modern realities. Thanks for shaing. K V Venkataramana

what an imagination; Great

A magnificent roll of designed words that fuel the flames of life-affirming freedom. There's a distinguished feeling of triumph here which runs deep and can bring to mind actual examples in today's complex world of countless social barriers. It's not too hard to embrace and indulge in the strong and righteous visual of it.

You are brilliant! ! !

Confined by a Wall; Restricted by a Boundary; Stagnated by it All..............overflowing in poetry! great! ! .

Please Asma... keep writing such great poems...10

What a striking metaphor! Beautiful succinct expression of everyone's desire to break out of the self and become a part of the whole. This is a really good poem!

Very good! I like the brick by brick! ! ! ! Good work! SusanB

Lovely poemo Asma. Take care Roger

gr8 poem asma.I liked it very much. yours, Nida

I greatly enjoyed this one. Such a wonderful expression of your feelings. So simple and direct. I can relate to these words so very much. Great job!

Asma, there's nothing stagnant about your poetry... I'd say it flows quite nicely. Great write! ! Brian

Break the walls and flow! ! The essence of water is same in the well or a river or an ocean...its the environment that makes it stagnant or flow or turbulent.... Well crafted poem. TO