*** Desire *** Comments
Desire intends to merge
With addiction
Crossfire, in between the feat
Body wasting…
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Each time i read this poem my heart melts i love it i realy realy love it my only thought was of you posting it in a newspaper where maybe someone will notice it and convince you to make your own poetry book :) great job luv always (well ur poems lol we never realy met) keep doing what your doing.
It's the longing for satisfaction that heightens the desire within us. Wow. This is beautifully crafted. You deserved to be among the tops. Congratulations!
oooou this just gave me chills, oh yes, love it. Your imagry is so full of life, sensuality spills over every intoxicating word. I felt it, yes you definitely took me there and what a pleasurable place to be.
This is a really good poem... it is full of feelings and very understanding....
A desire deep beyond the Taj Mahal of dreams.. I didn't know you had a poem in the Top500 Poems! Still, it's a very beautiful poem. Full of feelings. Love it!
wow such a strong poem it really has deep 'desire' into it
VIVIDLY IMAGINATIVE POEM DEAR POET. I SMPLY LOVED THE ABSTRCT USE OF YOUR WORD 'DIAPHGRAM' CAPTIVATING
Sulaiman, you know i'm not great with words, but you are amazing with them. i would have tosay that this poem is one of your best yet. it's truely amazing. the way you describe it, so elaborate yet so covered, is great. honestly, it's a masterpeice. Dolan
The extract from Phia's comment: From: .phia <3 (toome United Kingdom; Female; 17) To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof Date Time: 12/18/2008 6: 09: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: Desire hello sulaiman, i heeded your suggestion and read your new poem, desire. i found it astounding, perfectly balanced, it is truly great. i would be overjoyed if you would take the time to read my poems. thanks, phia.
Well, what can I say my brother.....Your vision is something to be admired and there for desired.........amazing work bro.....it's great to be back and to be reading your fine works again. keep them dizzy bro....10+++ your brother Jon
it is the good one...i just joy di club my english is poor but want to learn more abouth poetry.
I think this poem was great. Its shows how much effort you put in it. I enjoyed reading this poem and cant wait too read other poems' you've written. -Angelica Santos: D
The extract from Amelia's comment: From: Amelia E White (Fort Washington United States; Female; 62) To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof Date Time: 12/18/2008 1: 06: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: desire WOW! Breathtaking, your poem 'Desire'. Wonderfully written, I rated it a 10. Sorry I took so long responding to your request; I occupied with finals. So glad this semester is over. Amelia
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7/31/2025 2:34:15 PM # 1.0.0
Your choice of words and images is superb and involving. Very good. Thanks