Desire Comments

I enjoy pieces on fate. This is one of my favorites. 10

Desires are fancy n unstoppable. well thought poem....10 i wrote stroing desire... compare for name sake

Great lines! Simple & perfect! Love & Light! Karla

i liked how the poem flowed in a complex yet simple way you kinda had like two diff things embodied in one.

simple they can be asked... but these are difficult questions! ! ! nothing to do with their answers...! ! yes a very nice work Dear! 10.. Ali

You expose the complexities of our lives. There are so many ways of reaching out and 'touching' but the satisfaction varies as often as the desire that inspires the gesture.

yah! so true in this complexity of life...desire is reduced to mere commodities, some may are just for sale... the best poem on desire.....thank you my friend and God bless...a 10++++++

emotions are even tampered with modern gadgets of globalization... i envy you are can read the original compositions of tagore!

A poem with deep meaning. Very nice work! Thank you.

in truth it is easier to supress the first desire than satisfy all that follow, well done my friend

This is what they call the Netizen foolishness! ! ! .......and madness! ! !

well done, perhaps minor corrections thousands of times beyond foolishness

Ashraful, Very beautiful... It is pleasantly made... 10. Tsira

amazing poem. i agree with Yusof.

you write beyond words, you think beyond thought................marvelous ashraful.