Wednesday, August 3, 2005

Desire Comments

Rating: ★4.8

Audrey played in the sandbox,
Alone with a red, plastic fish.
Ryan grabbed it to take it away,
Wanting to play with it, too,
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Max Reif
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Joscephine Gomez 30 April 2007

A beautiful narrative, especially the last stanza.

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Maggie Flanagan-Wilkie 14 August 2005

Terrific piece of prose poetry, Max. Loved the ending.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 11 August 2005

Nice work. Thanks Max. LSP

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Stephen Parnell 10 August 2005

Simple and profound, the best of both worlds. Wonderful prose-poem, Max! Regards, Stephen Parnell

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Lamont Palmer 04 August 2005

I like how you spin a story, Max.

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