Thursday, January 28, 2016

Desire! Comments

Rating: 5.0

If we desire to drink the potion of love
From the springs of paradise
If we want to live in the proximity of God
Then Let our shattered heart with tears of seperation
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Aarzoo Mehek
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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 December 2021

Yes, god resides behind seventy thousand evils. A poem of great spiritual value and substance....5 stars

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Savita Tyagi 04 February 2016

Let the laments of our soul melt our beloved's heart....lovely lines. Beautiful expressions. Thanks for sharing. Just would like to add one more thing! Love your name.

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Abhilasha Bhatt 30 January 2016

Let's surpass the degree of material and worldy desires Let's enhace the good qualities and erase the weaknesses... Amazing poem.....just loved it....thank you for sharing :) God is here Don't search him anywhere God is in our soul Don't search him in the material...... :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 January 2016

You want it, i want it; with the shades of love. Able to see through the veils. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mithilesh Yadav 28 January 2016

Grrt penned....... Divine for the divine one

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M Asim Nehal 28 January 2016

Simply superb, you painted a gloomy picture of the life with colourful words.....Loved it.10+++++

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Nosheen Irfan 28 January 2016

Let our prayers rule the entire horizon Let the angels speak on our behalf Let the laments of our souls melt our beloved's heart...that's a beauty. I'm speechless.10 absolutely.

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Rajnish Manga 28 January 2016

How beautiful and sublime is the pursuit of the poet who is devoted to be one with the Almighty: So let's soak our being in the reflection of God Let's surpass the degree of material and worldy desires Let our prayers rule the entire horizon

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